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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643
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It’s only spring that sits on your shelf aching to be seen banging at the window like a banshee furious with colorful flowers spilling from the world while you try and get yourself together and bunch pity in a bouquet it sits and laughs on a park bench enjoying your losses under the sun |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
That's a darn good poem Page. I really like it.  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
your comments make my day.... |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Have enjoyed it so much, wanted to quote my favourite verse. But that will end up in quoting the whole poem.  Love it! You described pity so well it comes alive. FNG |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW! this is great - thanks for sharing as I enjoyed this very much also loved the imagery...well done ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have tried very often to capture this and you have done it. You personified it, and presented it with unlikely images-- banging at the window like a banshee furious with colorful flowers there are some complex emotions in the visual of that, and then, you sum it up, with the feeling of entitlement "enjoying your losses under the sun" quite an amazing gathering of words here, and I applaud the artistry of the whole of the presentation. Impressive.  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thank you FNG, Tracie and Serenity... Serenity- Your comment moved me. I am so happy that you enjoyed it so much. |
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