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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2006-02-10 10:33 PM

This Will Be

This space, in our time
Your place, some mine, what was ours,
This will be quick time

An Alice-spliced Wonderland
Waiting poetic lyrics

~*~

Yes, he is feeding me.

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

1 posted 2006-02-10 10:36 PM

Excellent!!!

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

2 posted 2006-02-10 11:36 PM

And perfect!

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

3 posted 2006-02-10 11:51 PM

Great with the nice pic....paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2006-02-10 11:58 PM

It is always quick time....but quick has two definitions, and some parts of always, are both.

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2006-02-11 12:34 PM

Yes, he is! What a really serene place and beautiful words to flow with it. *huggingutight*......jo

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

6 posted 2006-02-11 12:38 PM

Sissie....Yes, he is feeding you! The taste is sweet!

Edward Grim
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since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

7 posted 2006-02-11 12:38 PM

This is a great poem Karilea.

"An Alice-spliced Wonderland"

What a wonderful line, genius. Loved it. Cheers - Ed

Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it".

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2006-02-16 07:08 PM

Momma K, through him, you share with us some fine devine treats....

Huggin you tight sunny lady.....

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

9 posted 2006-02-16 07:56 PM

Oh yes..he sure is!

Listen...quietly, hear him whisper?
Heart hugs, Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2006-02-16 08:09 PM

It's hard to tell which I like more. It seems they were made for each other. You are a delight.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2006-02-16 08:26 PM

Oh, Gosh thats beautiful, such a peaceful place.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2006-02-16 09:44 PM

You sit beside the willow, weeping as does
she...letting the brook fall silently into
the pond that awaits the drought's shimmer..

And more.. Well done KJ..

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

13 posted 2006-02-16 09:56 PM

Oh I like this picture. Very nice.

Kathy
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since 2006-02-10

Posts 153

14 posted 2006-02-16 10:03 PM

I love poems that say so much with so few words...

and what structure...GREAT!

Hugs,
Kathy

exhale
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since 2003-06-13

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Alberta,Canada

15 posted 2006-02-16 10:17 PM

Beautiful.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

16 posted 2006-02-17 06:50 PM

nice read

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