Open Poetry #37 |
Orchard Vibrations |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A pink-cheeked sunrise Draws in ruby red Half hushed morning Returned from fate An answer Fresh air eyes Lay low in carouse Below the navel sway Sending scented signals In question Shrugged from his shoulder Turn away silence A rooted foothold Reluctantly blonde his sigh An answer Full bloom buttons Turn down playful smiles Flashing white sweet juice Rain upon his lips In question Vine, wrapped ankle Moving slowly north Inside the delicate slope Of gulping disbelief An Answer Then turned rosy side To the watering words Let lean gently in his arms Grape, teased lightly on the tongue The wine Copyright Kkh 02/16/06 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a beautiful vineyard of love! I couldn't capture any special line, for they all lingered wonderfully! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is a banquet a feast of words both delicious and sensuous |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Captivating TD. You are generous with your words. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
enjoyed! ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You dazzle my senses with every word. Love the last stanza, the sweet smell of the swirling bouquet, and the heady taste going down. Beautiful work, Kathleen~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'd like to order a case of this wine, Kathleen. Make that two. you have a way with metaphor and your work is always delicately woven womanly. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow! Now I need a cold shower. JL |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD I'd like a bottle of that! |
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