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Open Poetry #37

battle at the gates

ahiru
New Member

since 2006-01-05

Posts 7

0 posted 2006-02-10 01:13 PM

If it’s bright,
If this light should ,
disperse this battle I’m fighting,
Than why do I feel this way?

What do you do…
when it doesn’t make you happy?
How do you cope…?
These feelings I can’t handle.

I don’t want to grab that rope,
It just causes more complications
I can’t stand to see it,
that porcelain bowl

I won’t grab an empty plate
You can’t stop me,
I want my fill.

ManOfWolves28
Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 83

1 posted 2006-02-10 02:08 PM

This is either dealing with an illness or a craving. Either way it has a fitting title.

...If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice.

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

2 posted 2006-02-10 10:47 PM

Very Strong ending. I like it!

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