Open Poetry #37 |
Creamation |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cremation I burn the logs that died last year In my hand a bottle of beer And stir the ashes Camelot The ashes of the past some what I see the sparks that fly the air Lighting memories as I stare Bringing good and bad of store A second fire burns in roar Each one brings a warmth’s abide One without the other inside The beer that wets my lips in bliss Like wet this maiden left in kiss I often press the fires toll To light the fires in my soul Warm my hands the cold of age And flip my mind an early page I burn the logs that died last year And toast the memories with my beer |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for the cleansing of this fire, Sy. . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I often press the fires toll To light the fires in my soul Warm my hands the cold of age And flip my mind an early page carry a lighter with me where ever I go just in case (winkie) perfection as always!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine My pleasure. LeeJ You are a delight. Earth Angel No need to ask, why of course. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The beer that wets my lips in bliss Like wet this maiden left in kiss" And, may I join you in a tall cold one? Excellent write today Sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Yes you may, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed this, Sy. ...jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana, Thank you for the read and reply. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Yes. I enjoyed it greatly. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a tall cold one sounds good My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you dear Lady. MGROVES A tall cold one is good once in a while. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
I burn the logs that died last year In my hand a bottle of beer And stir the ashes Camelot The ashes of the past some what This really starts your poem with a kick! Great Work |
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