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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-02-09 05:58 PM



Romantic Words

In poetic flow,
I know that I
could say
romantic words
to melt your heart.

But I won't
say a word,
until I've heard
that you want
those soft thoughts
from my heart
to start.

JamesLee
February08
2006


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1 posted 2006-02-09 06:04 PM


Wonderful writing

Andrew

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2 posted 2006-02-09 07:15 PM


JamesMichael~
I have NO DOUBT that you will let them flow so beautifully as to turn her head ... and her heart~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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The Lady
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3 posted 2006-02-09 11:25 PM





Ummmm... really nice.

troubadour
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4 posted 2006-02-10 01:30 AM



Nicely done. Such words are not for everyone.

t

HopeS
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5 posted 2006-02-10 02:01 AM


I am sure if loving words flow , it will set her heart aglow

Hope

iliana
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6 posted 2006-02-10 02:29 AM


This is very sweet, JamesLee.
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7 posted 2006-02-10 03:22 AM


love
the way
romantic words
dance
from your heart

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

RedStoneEB
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8 posted 2006-02-10 04:50 AM


Like the gentleman waits to be hear you wait to speak your words of love
om
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9 posted 2006-02-10 08:57 AM


I like this one, starts an idea, finishes with thought, felt unforced, simply said well
LeeJ
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10 posted 2006-02-10 08:58 AM


very lovely thoughts
Debo
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11 posted 2006-06-02 12:16 PM


While leafing through old writes I found this beautiful poem and I just had to say how glad I am to have found it

Debo

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