Open Poetry #37 |
Null and void? |
miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Null and void? Null and void, I wonder if that’s me. A space within has emptied out The mouse can’t find the seed. Everywhere is seed that drifts From the air to currents stream Everywhere is nourishment Why does that not seem? I have the best of everything Employment with a cause Wonderful people who surround me Still, there is a pause. But… Everywhere the seeds will drift to spell out ‘growth is free’ Mowers daily yellow cut Feathered bubbles, Food for mouse and me. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Both seeking morsals, both seeking crumbs both poor as church mice hymns that sound as drumbs I could find the flow; I could find the image; I couldn't find the meaning, and it is not ment unkindly. I probably missed the finer points and the images were graphic to me, but the point and I mean it kindly was not. Dave |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Dave, It may not have a meaning, who knows? I can't seem to express my own feelings to myself, let alone to strangers! I didn't take what you said defensively--You probably have a good point! Thanks for your honesty. miscellanea |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
emptiness sometimes fills all the spaces leaving us left out without a seed yet you did indeed seed thoughts within this blue garden |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
"Still there is a pause " thats the feeling I have been having Hope |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Everywhere is seed that drifts From the air to currents stream Everywhere is nourishment Why does that not seem? thought provoking and have oft pondered the same... we humans are a complex arrangement of all that is, it is what we choose to believe...what the mind sees to be... cleaver write, enjoyed. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
'xactly......food. Good analogy, C. ....jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Missed this... miss you! |
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