Open Poetry #37 |
Up Close And Personal |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Up Close And Personal By: Noah Eaton 2/9/06 I love the taste of your date of birth, I love your laughter in moments of disconcert, I love how you’re not the slight bit concerned, when we move to the point of no return, I love you in your favorite polo shirt. I love falling through your trap doors, I love being your co-ambassador for rapport, I love your stride through each department store, and how you make it look hardcore, I love the scent of your perfume, mixed with the clothes in my drawer. You know it’s you I adore, I’m dying to know more, let’s get a lot more personal. your lips know how to underscore, show me all you have in store, I want to feel you up close and personal. I love your highlights in the twilight, I love you being the calcium light of the nightlife, I love you defending your title in every pillow fight, leaping around my bedroom like a water sprite, I love kissing away all your mosquito bites. I love your flesh for fantasy, I love the way you conjure synchronicity, I love your vivacity, kissing the sun on your ten-speed, I love caressing the back of your creamy knees. You know it’s you I adore, I’m dying to know more, let’s get a lot more personal. your lips know how to underscore, show me all you have in store, I want to feel you up close and personal. (Love your lover like you love her, submit to her deepest wish, be honest, don’t be shy, how much do you want it?) I love you defending our love for novelty songs, I love how in public we sing them along, I love cuddling up with you on “Muskrat Love”, crossing crosswalks hand in glove, I love you wrapped in a sarong. I love your ambiguity of the menu at the sushi bar, I’d love you in Vina Del Mar, Qatar or Myanmar, I love lying with you in the back of a trolley car, strumming your hair, thanking God I’ve found where you are, I love kissing you against the backdrop of our favorite star. You know it’s you I adore, I’m dying to know more, let’s get a lot more personal. your lips know how to underscore, show me all you have in store, I want to feel you up close and personal. (Love your lover like you love her, submit to her deepest wish, be honest, don’t be shy, how much do you want it?) "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
It sounds like a rap song, I don't know if that's what you were going for. It's good. - Ed Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it". |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Nope, this is actually power-pop style! But come to think of it, I can see how you'd see this work as a rap song! (smiles) Yay, thanks Edward! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now that is what I'd call being up close and personal! Hmmm! You got me to thinking. The love of my life has never kissed my mosquito bites! This summer I think I'd like him to try it! He has very healing lips! ~ and I always up for trying something new! lol As per usual, sweet passionate angel boy, I love your poems on loving! Hugs with love, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love it Noah! THIS one belongs on the CD!!!! Hugs~Nancy |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
ya got the beat this is sweet My spirit will rise |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So sweet, Noah! You should include this one on your CD. ...jo |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I love your love song~ more women need to be loved like this ~ARH |
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