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JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2006-02-09 01:33 PM

Your Words of Sweet Rhyme
For my friend Lee J.

Soft and tender,
your words melt my heart,
as a gentle cooing,
from your spirit to your hand.

I feel a touch of your words,
as you pen your art
letters and words along the shore,
written deep in shimmering sand…

Words towering to blench the darkest of storm,
and yet,harmless,
as the nest of a morning dove...

Your stirring melody awakens the sun’s own form
and welcomes its warmth
among the piney woodland groves
where you share your lifes words in love...

With eagerness, I await your next verse or rhyme,
uncomplaining,yet unwilling to miss just that one,
When you pen your words in verse.

Your words of sweet rhyme…
(Thank you LeeJ)

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2006-02-09 05:08 PM

JL

I hope you sent her a little note to let her know you posted this. She is indeed an amazing poet and inspiration. I'm sure she'll appreciate this tribute to her.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-02-09 05:17 PM

JL~
What a lovely poetic gesture to *gift* to a friend~

She's a jewel .. and you shine pretty brightly yourself~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

3 posted 2006-02-09 05:25 PM

To grant another poet those words is like giving them a piece of hope these words shall survive through me, through what i show to others, to be that poet is wonderous.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-02-09 10:25 PM

She does indeed
welcome the sun...

an excellent tribute
to a fine poetess, JL.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2006-02-10 12:01 PM

Thank you JL for honouring our Lovely Lee so graciously!

I happen to be a fan of both your poetic souls!

Linda

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

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South Africa

6 posted 2006-02-10 12:57 PM

What a lovely tribute to a great poetess. May she long grace these pages.

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

7 posted 2006-02-10 01:06 AM

I second all you say. A wonderful tribute to a masterful writer. martyjo

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2006-02-10 08:23 AM

JL, your such a caring person, with a large heart and insightful mind. I don't deserve this, but hug ya for it, ya poop!!!

Thank you for this, and for your support, advice, and friendship over the years...

Wishing you the best day and great weekend ahead...and a special many thanks sent your way from me to you.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2006-02-10 10:13 AM

I can think of no greater honor than to inspire another poet. *S* Both her words and yours are a treat to us all. *S*

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2006-02-10 03:02 PM

YEP! She is all that.

But she says I'm a POOP?
I hate when that happens!

JL

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