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Lost Minds |
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buckysimone Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 27 |
Lost inside my head I blame it on you My past reverberates through my mind Through the broken pathways I’ve created For myself Little problems Little dreams Little hearts The bruises carry through my shoulders On these shoulders I I, carry the weight of the world Clenching my fists Onto my head Voices throughout my heart Hurtful eyes Hurtful minds Hurtful hands Cry at night Wishing Hoping Praying It will go away I blame it on you On all your hate Your glory Your childish lips Heart And laughs Your laughs Lost inside my head You molest me with your words Words I so So passionately want to dissipate I close my eyes Hoping tomorrow will be better I remember your names I remember your hate Hate towards a boy A boy who so patiently waited to leave Leave a world where he was ridiculed I blame it on you Blame the way I am today Blame the hate I feel towards YOU people Blame the people who watched Watched me fall apart Lost inside my head A canvas paints the pain One more glass One more Puff One more cry One more time I cry for the boy A boy who patiently waited For answers from no one who could understand Understand why I’m lost inside my head |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And being lost like that is frightening, especially when no one reaches out. A good poignant write. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Kris Put some words together 'Everyone has to have some body to look down - then you can feel like everything you chose' Your words are good, your talent is, but on this are you just a milk to be shunting on the bottom end of a train as they earn Dave |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
I beg to differ - This seems very stream of concious to me, which happens to be my favorite style of write. Let's one inside your head. The mind - talking faster than we can type - screaming - yearning for others to know what is difficult for us to keep pace with in speech. Love your rant. Love your write. Understand it - need it - appreciate it! JM |
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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
Lost inside my head..... Words that can't, some times be said. Feelin it, jinx |
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