Open Poetry #36 |
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Physiognomy |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
And who’s to say What gives a face its stern looks The taste for blood . . . Or a cry in the night |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a good point we can guess, but may be quite wrong |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi John, to me, this spoke volumns about simply this... Don't worry about what someone else is thinking, worrry about your own thoughts...? Good one |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This hit home. As far back as I can remember people have had need to remind me to smile when I was working, or doing something. It seems I can not smile and think at the same time, and that sure annoys some people!..martyjo |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Bravo! *S* I realize we live in a world where "have a nice day" flows freely from lips without thought... but I'll never forget trying to get through a day of work worrying whether my dad's tests would show cancer or not... and having a total stranger tell me to "SMILE, it can't be that bad" as we passed on the street. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Oh Yes, and all those years of working 4 to 12 and caring for Bud while he was having cancer treatments. Visiting him when in the hospital and rushing off to work, holding back the tears. I asked my supervisor to tell the others not to ask me, I would tell her and she could pass it on. If every one came to me with pity in their eyes and I had to talk about it, I knew I would break. My way worked and I only broke down twice, once late at night, and one day in Denny's trying to have a fast lunch. I had to have it packed to go. So agreed John, "nobody knows the trouble I've seen" is true and people should have a little empathy. Thanks for the thread, it helps to let it out even now. martyjo |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
And who’s to say What gives a face its stern looks The taste for blood . . . Or a cry in the night'''' maybe both... In your light I learn how to love |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love that word! The first time that I ever saw it was in a love letter written for me from a young man who was extolling my virtues as seen through his eyes. ![]() When I got to "beautiful physiognomy" I thought that he was becoming a tad too personal! lol Then I looked the word up in the dictionary and had a good laugh! Regarding your provocative poem, I believe both would result in a less than smiling face. (It certainly would mine!) In actuality, there are many things that can wipe the smile from my "beautiful physiognomy" ~ lol There I go chuckling again! Love & Light, EA |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
in ruins. life will come out it. |
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