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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-08-11 10:44 AM



Summer

The cool
Pale rain—

A slender girl
Gliding by


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2005-08-11 10:53 AM


you love her?

Nice but sad for you

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-08-11 01:03 PM


nice
Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-04-27 11:52 AM


summer rain, so easily bring fall here.
a slender girl passed
an old lady will come


always good.

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