navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #36 » Victory Girl
Open Poetry #36
Post A Reply Post New Topic Victory Girl Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-08-06 03:03 PM



Midnight hours
In local bars
In face of war
The fat bomb ticking

Bugles drums
For the golden ring
Of church bells
In celebration

She said she did
What she felt she could
To serve
And help the nation

Though what it was
Made her lower drawers
Had mornings prone to question


© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
1 posted 2005-08-06 03:18 PM


lol
Ratleader
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
2 posted 2005-08-08 01:09 AM


....and it was such a big fleet out there!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
3 posted 2005-08-09 01:09 PM


ROFL... I wasn't expecting the ending... love it! *G*
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
4 posted 2007-04-27 12:02 PM


wow!
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #36 » Victory Girl

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary