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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Justin, We have stalled we talk about being hurt, the escaped dream beautiful mischief of those still moments believe me, you never forget the ache If you only knew how the silence attracts my heart toward you because I know the stars are your friends even in your dark empty rooms where walls of memories embrace these Fall days with melancholy, I have prayed bring back each memory, those even to painful - - - the vase has gathered petals around its basin one for each tear there are thousands this, your voice of psalms this, my voice of psalms the hope that lives inside of me enwraps our love I have never forgotten even when the nights have come and gone in a trail of fire, our fire in each particle of sand & stone that bears our name it does exist there are moments I too need to be away from the furious crowds to collapse all this dust that surrounds our feet I think experience is sometimes all we have in this maze of life at the edge of wood I have learned just this: “you can see the forest through the trees” I may rest between each moment however, I am not afraid because I believe ~~~~ {Searching for OZ Series-} /pip/Forum93/HTML/000841.html /pip/Forum93/HTML/000888.html In your light I learn how to love In your beauty how to make poems You dance inside my chest where no one sees you and that sight becomes this art |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lauren, I do hope that one day Your Oz series... becomes a keepsake in thousands of hands... these are so very beautiful, and the songs are right there With the Songs of Solomon... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Greeneyes, You are truly unique. Your series is beautiful. Mystical in it's own way your writing captures the butterfly in it's moment of suspended glory. SG |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hauntingly beautiful Lauren.. I do love this series.. Excellent penning once again. Hugs & Luv ya, Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Poignantly beautiful. Eric |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Much to know ... in these words ... Beautiful! Ct |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You really must get published, Lauren. This is beyond what I could explain the exactly what stirs within my own heart. and yes: I think experience is sometimes all we have in this maze of life |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the stars are your friends even in your dark empty rooms where walls of memories embrace these Fall days with melancholy, I have prayed bring back each memory, those even to painful - - - the vase has gathered petals around its basin one for each tear there are thousands this, your voice of psalms this, my voice of psalms the hope that lives inside of me enwraps our love I have never forgotten even when the nights have come and gone in a trail of fire, our fire in each particle of sand & stone that bears our name ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ yes.... more more more...MORE!! this moth is insatiable.  even when the nights have come and gone in a trail of fire, our fire in each particle of sand & stone that bears our name lord have mercy girlie.... how amazingly lovely is that.    I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
(chasing butterflies!) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
"If you only knew how the silence attracts my heart toward you" Much to contemplate in it all... but this captured me instantly.  &  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
love to all and thank you for reading..... In your light I learn how to love |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
.... the forest through the trees ... I can see you there .... CT |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Loved every single line Lauren, a stunning write and a  M xx  ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
"there are moments I too need to be away from the furious crowds to collapse all this dust that surrounds our feet" when you are away... even for the moment, dust settles in my eyes, through their tears. if only ..... * S CT |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I think experience is sometimes all we have in this maze of life at the edge of wood I have learned just this: “you can see the forest through the trees” I may rest between each moment however, I am not afraid because I believe" Experience and hope.  always the answer I think. But, oh what a beautiful way to say it! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know that moment that happens every so often, that when you see, read, or touch something it stirs inside of you a feeling there are no words to describe? Well lady, sometimes your poetry does that to me (like seeing my granddaughter's smile you know the one right?) and I think, I sure hope she is keeping all these for her girls. You put the beauty into every word, and give it true meaning m'friend. If you bind all these I will buy it! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh Lady... dear sweet Lady Lauren how on earth did this beauty slip by, and I almost missed it... I love your soul L~... but you already know that, my sister of heart.  yesterday is gone |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
love to all and thank you... |
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