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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2005-08-05 11:20 PM

Searching for OZ Series
~~

Tonight he  is lost,
his shadow, his only companion
he shares  moonlight and thought  along the stretch
of dirt road

We move in different dimensions
under earth
                                   coral on the wheel of time - -
the silence seeps through  windows
in shapes of broken sand

whenever I dream of first rain,
I think of September
and how we met greeting the dawn
with pure sky, pure love
always                        daring the moon
to pull the dark

the delicate trace
of silhouettes

whose hands have touched
the spell of smoke

and the hush, after the coming winter/s

I fear the silence of storms
when the door is never close enough
or                               the stillness of fires
to prove the sign of rainbows

now in mornings coming
I find your handprints
pressed to heart
every trace of salt
I have become

rising free

letting it   be            until our last dance

                                  knowing

we are almost home

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-08-05 11:27 PM

the feel melencholy, caressed within acceptance

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2005-08-06 12:18 PM

We move in different dimensions
under earth
                                   coral on the wheel of time - -
the silence seeps through  windows
in shapes of broken sand

whenever I dream of first rain,
I think of September
and how we met greeting the dawn
with pure sky, pure love
always                        daring the moon
to pull the dark

the delicate trace
of silhouettes

whose hands have touched
the spell of smoke

and the hush, after the coming winter/s
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

*sigh*

*whispering yeeeesssssss*

you rock you rock.

I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain
I don't mind helping you out ...
But I want you to remember my name

Alanis

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2005-08-06 12:36 PM

coral on the wheel of time - -
the silence seeps through windows
in shapes of broken sand

whenever I dream of first rain,
I think of September

You heard the lady, yes indeedy - you do ROCK!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-08-07 09:51 PM

"whenever I dream of first rain,
I think of September
and how we met greeting the dawn
with pure sky, pure love
always daring the moon
to pull the dark"

Lauren~What can I say that I have not said before?
Exquisite writing!

Love ya lady~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2005-08-08 12:06 PM

My third reading of this today, I think....it's that good -- of course.

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2005-08-08 11:09 AM

We move in different dimensions
under earth
                                   coral on the wheel of time - -
the silence seeps through  windows
in shapes of broken sand

whenever I dream of first rain,
I think of September
and how we met greeting the dawn
with pure sky, pure love
always                        daring the moon
to pull the dark

the delicate trace
of silhouettes

whose hands have touched
the spell of smoke

and the hush, after the coming winter/s
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

*library*
till I can hold the actual book in me hand.

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

7 posted 2005-08-08 11:17 AM

Greeneyes,

"whenever I dream of first rain,
I think of September
and how we met greeting the dawn
with pure sky, pure love
always daring the moon
to pull the dark"

This is simply wonderful! I enjoyed this so very much. Looking forward to more.

SG

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2005-08-09 12:21 PM

thank you for the heartfelt replies.....I am slowly but surely working this out....

love to all....

~~
(Ed I emailed you)..

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2005-08-09 03:25 PM

"now in mornings coming
I find your handprints
pressed to heart
every trace of salt
I have become"

...because this is how it should be..

and it is yours that should be on top.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

10 posted 2005-08-09 03:38 PM

delicate and moving ...

felt each grain.

Beautiful!

CT

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

11 posted 2005-08-09 03:45 PM

Amazing and awesome...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2005-08-09 09:39 PM

Your talent is awe inspiring. Thanks for this.
Sandra

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

13 posted 2005-08-11 12:23 PM

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