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Strong, Weak, and Human
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Strong, Weak, and Human |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Strong, Weak, and Human It seems you're no different Thinking you are a godsent There is no paper back book that could not bare your good look A strong hero to save me and show me how to be free Beneath the facade you hold are secrets you have not told You are strong, weak, and human Even tin men have a heart -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely written |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
quote: I think this last line clinches it! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This i enjoyed...you write thoughtfully.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, it is very wise to assume, that men are men, and only human, not saviors, or something which can be changed, love em as they are...for who they are...but we cannot expect them to take "our" pain away or make us happy, if we are not already there... Hugs to ya, a great write.... |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
Through our strength we find weakness and in the weakness the truth of who we are is revealed. Enjoyed this very much. thank you for the beautiful words. -John nice use of muffin |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you, Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Now... begin to live your life like you have written about it in these words.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A rose is a rose, is a rose. And a man is a man, is a man. ~ "and even a tin man has a heart".  EA |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow thank you, I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
this reminds me of that saying "to err is human" enjoyed If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Oh thank you. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
True of most , but well stated enjoyed adagio |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed reading the poem. Thanks for sharing. Hugs,  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow you really dig up the old ones lol. I am glad you enjoyed. I plan on puting out some poems in the next week. We will see I have done alot of growing the last few days so I guess that would explain the break. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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sunsetgun Junior Member
since 2005-07-17
Posts 21 |
full of wisdom I'd say |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you, -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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