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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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voice of stones speaking water folded lights are shimmer songs that escape the mouths of sand another days ocean spends her tides on phantasmal horizons there she plays her cove cards early and forgets her diamonds when a monger's pharos touches just the ends of her ends with whispered apparition _______________ dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-18-2005 08:50 AM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
oh, I love this view...shimmery and dreamlike... K |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
nature's dream purse.... sighs... |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very much enjoyed a keeper adagio |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*wow*  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful scene set. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you for the home view...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"voice of stones speaking water folded lights are shimmer songs that escape the mouths of sand" you could write about a spoon and it would do something to me.  especially love the quoted verse... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Love this, the title alone drew me in..seems so dream like.. |
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