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Circles in a Dark Jar |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533
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Limbo’s cold storage, shuttered shudderings in a mirrored jar of thickening glass Voices muffle, their emotions obscure oaths smothered in the pulse of twin temples, the moss of thought Light, illusory and rare, reveals no source, the hemline of its treks beyond reach Printless feet leave no worn path to or fro Seeing jeweled eyes, knowing them hard as diamonds Trust not what is whispered, the crimeless rhymes, the rhymeless crimes POETS AGAINST THE WAR IS REDUNDANT |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Voices muffle, their emotions obscure oaths smothered in the pulse of twin temples, the moss of thought I have sorely missed you, so happy to see you back here again...although not always understanding your articulations, I still do love how your write imagry, you take me to great places... Well done sir! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Light, illusory and rare, reveals no source, the hemline of its treks beyond reach ~*~ It is such a pleasure to read the jewels of you once again... Welcome home, Richard... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSWells Redundant is the key, nice to see you back. Enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Seeing jeweled eyes, knowing them hard as diamonds Trust not what is whispered, the crimeless rhymes, the rhymeless crimes" It is such a pleasure to read you once more Sir. Indeed...welcome back!  Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is most definately a jewel, to be treasured. Welcome home dear sir. I refuse to make plans past this moment in time.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I've missed your poetry, Richard...like the others, I am really glad to welcome you home!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RSW~ Your title drew me in ... and I really appreciated this - 'the moss of thought' Nice to read you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
well, right now, I only want the cookie jar LOL not a dark jar that resembles Pandora's box or any other confined vessel but I'll be back again later to read this and then probably laugh at my ludicrous reply |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Summer heat and forced confinement can get to us all, but not on such a deep level Richard. These lines were awesome by the way, Seeing jeweled eyes, knowing them hard as diamonds and these, Light, illusory and rare, reveals no source, the hemline of its treks beyond reach Stay well. This heat too will pass. Nice to read you again. ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I came back to say, this one actually blew me away on the third reading or maybe the fourth I saw the light and it was not pleasant, the beam over the towers searching for lost souls anyway, just wanted you to know I read this one several times, not unusual for a Wells |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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