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a quick bite |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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It wasn't what he said, I guess. It was the way he cocked his head as I scooped my scrambled eggs with a knife onto the spork in a diner in New York someone must have pressed E3 damn-I-almost-choked-on-that: (please) "Don't stand so close to me" as I lit a cigarette ordering the apple pie and my lips were licking dread coffee black so I could blow smoke into his eyes and yes I snapped and paid the check,"I guess, I wasn't hungry after all..." It wasn't what he said. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
It rarely is.  Great to read you again. I've missed being able to. Hope things are well for you... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It never usually is, but then, we do learn to read minds, don't we...(wink) Morning lady...hope you had a wonderful weekend!  |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Nice write, much enjoyed!! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
It's a great start to my morning when I get a quick bite of you.  love you lady.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Karen- THe only criticism I have is that you are going to make me stop writing permenantly if you continue to write as amazing as this.  Great write. http://www.mysticwicks.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Still up for a ...peppered cheese melt? OR a Cuban sandwich? you never cease to amaze me m'lady mxx |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
So good...you are so good! Patricia |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you know, for some odd reason this made me feel as if I were sitting across from THE creepiest guy I could imagine, ( I can see his teeth and stuff, K - God) eating complete crap for dinner and listening to THE worst music, ever - just wishing for the ground to open up and swallow me. Almost like that one point in life when you see someone like chew the wrong way and suddenly it sends chalkboard sparks up your spine and you decide OK thats it, I'm done . . . (Ok, I actually love the Police) *grin* |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Good one, loved it, I can just imagine; what it must be like to be in that place that day Hey ! did you lose my number? adagio |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, I felt as if I was sitting right there with you as he was watching us both. Ya know? I think it was the way he cocked his eye around at us!! Hugs to you, Lady. Ethel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I coulda called it "Ode to a Creep." I neglected to mention that he had begged me to go to breakfast with him, and then "lost" his wallet. I sure can pick 'em, eh? Thanks for reading! |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Sounds like something that happenned to me 16 years ago... and nine months later out pops my son... LOL ya gotta do the math and read between the lines here too.... good to know that I wasn't the only one taken in ..... some just see the signs sooner.... HMMMMM. Sherry  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I've 'sporked' a bite over an E3 and someone stepping too close inside my breathing space. Enjoyed the bite of this'un. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Sounds like a few guys I've dated...this is cool you know this reminds me of a poem I wrote a coupla years ago...this was like deja vu..full moon right??? if not then there should be one!!  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Yep... "Ode to a Creep" works... *smile* Enjoyed this, K... Love ya, YOU... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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