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Sounds That Stick To Your Feet
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Sounds That Stick To Your Feet |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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wind holds its breath offering atonement in it’s even gaze where delicate perfection stood ~and lives sanity picked the lock like night at play interleaving metaphors of comatose & Egyptian antiquity there we are! wandering halls of wildlife Micro-climatic hollowed grounds wiretaps accessible insight plausible with uplifted wrists anchoring the psyche later admitting distribution of birth control with age of reason plays show & tell mythology snake-like for inventors with contrary ways seams a credibility to indulge merely suspicion of theories except for internal evidence of the human eye soaring the mournful cries of secret codes that are known society fears what is, for the sake of tradition banning all that is included with a force called worldly rule something the vast majority toasts to for the egotistical interest of an insignificant minority can such things be? We have seen the common opportunist Philistine illusions dipping their hands In still waters of open accounts absurd mosaics fighting all that is cruel misplacing a note in a song perhaps on purpose? that shall rhyme with the last word in liquid skies where God’s wave flags where profits are poets and poets are better paid workers tracing wings that they might someday own who treat the masses with rice krispies of gold choosing the company of will without being aware of the cause standing on both sides of the door frame where a conclusion suggests itself oppressed but not withering we wear hard headed towns as… there will always be the matrix of question drafting a higher phase re-cast by molecules of intended meanings feel it touch it be it step out into the soul waiting for the appropriate translator the piano players in long sky vessels to whom a human heart belongs the hearers who plant small seeds where a ladder is built for feet |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"society fears what is, for the sake of tradition banning all that is included with a force called worldly rule something the vast majority toasts to for the egotistical interest of an insignificant minority can such things be?" Yes, they can and are...our political environment proves it is very much so, but how to change it? A well done poem, as is usual for you, LeeJ -----------ice/ford ><> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, who treat the masses with rice krispies of gold choosing the company of will without being aware of the cause standing on both sides of the door frame where a conclusion suggests itself oppressed but not withering Too true, Good morning sweet. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
What an amazing mastery of vocabulary you have. I was just in awe of the way you have your way with words...and in turn your words just seem to have their way with me! Beautiful write! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Digging up some sounds that stuck to my feet...   |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You truly have a magic pen! Eric |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"society fears what is, for the sake of tradition banning all that is included with a force called worldly rule something the vast majority toasts to for the egotistical interest of an insignificant minority" I've got to highlight this as well and also agree that you do indeed have a magic pen. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."the hearers who plant small seeds where a ladder is built for feet" LeeJ girl, You mesmerize me with your expansive insights...loved this last line among wonderous works here... Excellent write. TD |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes an excellant write  My spirit will rise |
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