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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-12-14 08:09 AM


and now on the morning
hurry to me my love
leap from your dreamer's watering

fly wide eyed to my sighs
there is no need for dressing
in your proper formality

wear only the liquor of your whisper
for this thirst that is addiction
for this lovely insatiability

bless this fragile mortality of me
and drape your willing over my wanting
let me bring you my chords of worship

bind me then with your proper sighing
and the sacrifice of your piety
plume me with your ardent feathering

capture my virility in ethereal entangle

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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2005-12-14 08:14 AM


I held my breath as I read this ...sighs

Always a pleasure to read you Mr D

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2005-12-14 08:19 AM


ms D, the pleasure is mine to have your eyes...it was capeless at first in mature
but the heat of winter required a covering

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-12-14 08:34 AM


wait....(gargling with chambord) ok...

bless this fragile mortality of me
and drape your willing over my wanting
let me bring you my chords of worship

enjoy the word play here.....

bind me then with your proper sighing
and the sacrifice of your piety
plume me with your ardent feathering

feathers away....opps, did I say that...
enjoyed this much

capture my virility in ethereal entangle

seriously, and yanno, there is an all powerful spiritual essense within the love of two..and you sir, have captured it and caged it within the words of your heart, soul and mind...

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4 posted 2005-12-14 08:36 AM


OMG D, you've done it again,

collapsed me and left me breathless that is....

beautiful pen-speak m'friend!

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2005-12-14 08:53 AM


ms Lee J, thanks lady friend...ah shucks..you smile me.

_____

ms gs, you are so pretty when you are weak in the knees, thanks lady

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6 posted 2005-12-14 11:01 AM


DS

"bind me then with your proper sighing
and the sacrifice of your piety
plume me with your ardent feathering"

I have a thing for feathers and things.  

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-12-14 11:06 AM


ms martie..you are so bad
in a nice way
do things go better with coke?
thanks neighbor lady

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8 posted 2005-12-14 03:54 PM


I've got a "thing" for capes.
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2005-12-14 03:59 PM


ms serene...me too now..am glad you didn't read the mature one first..thanks lady
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10 posted 2005-12-14 05:34 PM


I did read the one in mature first...

this one is better...softer, sweeter...

looks good on you mister

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2005-12-14 05:59 PM


ms sue sea...softer sweeter...ah shucks..pout..there goes my rep..

thanks to you lady


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12 posted 2005-12-14 08:33 PM


Dark~

'wear only the liquor of your whisper
for this thirst that is addiction
for this lovely insatiability'


OMG .... and it's not even Friday~
Hurry up calendar !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

MGROVES
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13 posted 2005-12-18 04:16 AM


My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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