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Braid |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Braid Slipping strands of gold between the comb of fingers Part the was of when, part the silver highlight, part the blessed auburn soul Twist in unison the untangled, lay upon the palm in weightlessness Each the vision of a blend of swift and flowing tresses Fine the fairest weave of ribbons and wishes There is no rhyme, and yet there is such music Falling together, turning neat each part denotes And yes, I linger in the after play of soft curls brought to bounce For once it was the single strand that was a forelock gold And fate her name, as I reached out and grabbed her then Turning once a lonely syllable to song Copyright Kkh 07/27/05 |
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Warbler New Member
since 2005-07-09
Posts 8 |
You've woven a song that sings to a lonely soul... much enjoyed |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Agreeing with Warbler, you have a splendid grace that flows as you weave these strands of life. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed~ My spirit will rise |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very nice. I like the flow of your words and the picture it created. SG |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
This is superb Bodger |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
strands of fine tunes strummed by the diamond herself |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
stunninng!!!! |
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