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Open Poetry #36

Mirrored Truth for Alice

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-08-01 09:12 AM

She moves so slowly
surrounded by her unknown
the coming of
keeping her walking
through the night.

Each step a wait gain
falling on shoulders
making the dawn ache
feeling trapped.

Trying to relive herself
mirroring those younger years
only to realize
they are gone.

But she sees what she sees,
her eyes still young enough,
her mind left youthful
only...her body knows
the truth.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-08-01 09:24 AM

this was amazingly beatiful

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-08-01 09:24 AM

Hmm! Sounds like you and I have the same body!

Maureen, I really get into your poetry! ~ and your poetry really gets into me!

Sending you a big, warm and understanding hug,
Linda

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