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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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There are time the rose pricks one’s hand and leaves upon the heart a moment of wonder. A time of simple reflection, of bewilderment or ponder. A time when the bloom of a bud happens silently, almost invisibly...yet brings to the shimmer of one’s eye such form and passion. Bring to my aching eyes the passion that melts one’s heart and tugs the hearty sigh from once moistened lips.... For, only then the gaze shall grasp the moment and cast upon the earth that lies before a foot that waits to step...and share life’s joys...forever till a fiery dawn rises no more... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh dear Barry..I just loved that last verse! |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Very nice undercurrent Bodger |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Introspection blushes rose highlights on the sighs of this most wonderful write. TD |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful write Barry. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
beautiful - s |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, with my muse as my witness, I swear I was breathing in the beautiful scent of a rose as I was reading your lovely poem.  Linda |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Barry, I have missed many of your great writes. I'm glad I found this one. I was refreshing. I have such respect for your writing and the values you express through your poetry. Your messages are always strong, clear, and profound. Great write. Miss reading you. Warm regards my brother-in-arms, Kevin |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"For, only then the gaze shall grasp the moment and cast upon the earth that lies before a foot that waits to step" Awesome, BJ!  ....jo |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling man, Oh my what can I say but this is utterly perfect the flow in this is truly excellent, I'm glad I got to read this delight. You know if I ever learn to have half the skill you have I'd love to write real poetry like this. Absolutely wonderful as always Mushy xx xx xx Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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