Open Poetry #36 |
Double Dare (Inspired) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Not once, nor twice the bell rings upon the hearth. Incessant, this beast that challenges my quill to a race of thoughts that oft come in mere tiny puffs of syllables....scattered rhyme. And, you stand quietly there, leaning against the oak that my boyhood often challenged to a duel of Peter Panish chivalry.....Why then, old wise friend, do you stand idly aside and watch me stumble as thoughts fall into the trash receptacle beyond the gate... Some day, my impish one.....I shall call the bluff of your whispered dares....and then, at that time...I shall smile as a toast is raised to celebrate yet one more time when.....the melding of minds wins over the matter of the moment....and dares the joust to again be set free... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Inspired, yes! A great read! Don't you love those double dares? "Not once, nor twice the bell rings upon the hearth. Incessant, this beast that challenges my quill to a race of thoughts that oft come in mere tiny puffs of syllables....scattered rhyme." Much enjoyed, miscellanea |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry....What a way to kick your muse into gear...I loved it. I need someone to dare me...er..I mean, my muse!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Misce.... and Martie, toothpicks at 10 paces.....how about that...? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Powerful lines! I agree with Martie's reply! Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
BJ, yes, you do understand, don't you. Thanks for sharing this. However, I think your muse is quite lively! Much enjoyed. ....jo |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
wow! great inspiration indeed, enjoyed the imagery you created. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
wonderful way to be inspired, and if that's what it takes to get you motor running, whoam I to argue when the results are so good. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yeah I like this Barry... Great lines here... "the melding of minds wins over the matter of the moment....and dares the joust to again be set free..." Eric |
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