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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2006-01-06 08:29 AM



Sounds

Touch deep with sound drum
beat low scarlet in tattoo
stir this soul to sing

Layer grass with pulse
hear hard thum in arteries
stir this hum for souls

Old, dead tree gives life
round and round beats this aged heart
drummed tattoos in chant


~*~

"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron

© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2006-01-06 08:58 AM


These sounds have expanded from your heart to mine and I think they are very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita


LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-01-06 09:10 AM


Bloomed honeysuckle wavers in the chainlink...yours to mine...utterly meditative and peaceful
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-01-06 09:13 AM


Sunshine

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-01-06 09:15 AM


Beautiful sounds to start my day.
Well done Karilea.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Fagin
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5 posted 2006-01-06 09:03 PM


The pulse and music of nature beats on
tracie66
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6 posted 2006-01-06 09:05 PM


sunshine this is devine, beautiful writing as always.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



scorpio
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right...there
7 posted 2006-01-06 09:36 PM


Very much enjoyed Karilea.

believe in what your heart feels...

Neeraja
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8 posted 2006-01-07 04:37 AM


Smile... well you stirred my soul to sing!

Thanks Karilea



Neeraja

ice
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9 posted 2006-01-07 04:52 AM


Sunnyshine

You knew I would love this, didn't you.....

_______ ____ice/ford
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iliana
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10 posted 2006-01-07 04:55 AM


This conjured up a very interesting scene, SIL.  Amazing how you do that!   ....jo
Kethry
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11 posted 2006-01-07 06:18 AM


What very lovely, life giving sounds you beat in this tatoo. Excellent work lady.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



ethome
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12 posted 2006-01-07 06:50 AM


Yes, a fine illustrative example in poetic form.........Things just change in matter form.....Very well done Karilea.

Eric

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