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Shedding Light (For Duncan)
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Shedding Light (For Duncan) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Flicker of light Beckons me to the heat touch of rhythmic beating Engulfed by a flame That licks it’s way into my pores My life Until it consumes Even the smallest parts of me Allowing me to know You as myself To feel what you feel To be who you are Who you were Who you will be Teaching me The raw of you Bleeding for you in times Of need Smooth of you When you bleed for me Swallowing me with whispers Of pure unadulterated Love of a friend _____________________________ Because, some days we all need a reminder of why we are here.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whew! Now that's what I'd call a loving friendship! So passionately pure! I felt suffused with the loving warmth of your words. A friendship like yours is worth more than all the gold in the world. Love & Friendships, Linda  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Tftbb...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
WAHOO!!!!! I got Duncan in here!!!  That is no small thing... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ This is a lovely post for a pretty neat fellow~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WHOOHOOO!!! Can you bring him back again Susan? You sure know how to get his attention!  In the midst of winter, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, what a sweet way of showing a real special friendship!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful feelings expressed in equally wonderful poetry! Love and Joy. Margherita  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
“Allowing me to know You as myself To feel what you feel To be who you are Who you were Who you will be” como eres yo era como soy tú serás |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
This poem is so cool,I loved those bleeding lines. cherio,paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There is a subtle change in your style that I'm enjoying so much. My favorite verse here is the first: "Flicker of light Beckons me to the heat touch of rhythmic beating Engulfed by a flame That licks it’s way into my pores My life Until it consumes Even the smallest parts of me" I don't have to tell you how overdone the candle and flame thing is, and yet you not only used it, you made it fresh. Like really looking at it for the first time. Brava, sweet friend! And Duncan? Shaddup and write something, will ya? fk  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Susan, a beautiful expresiion of love for a friend... m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Icey? A veces, nosotros llevamos la misma piel. (the spanish was never something I was good at so it may be a bit...well, miscombobalated)... Thank you all for the time you gave to read and respond...  fk K! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Sí Saltamontes, por eso nosotros llevan ropas fuera de la casa. |
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