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Lay Me Down
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Lay Me Down |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Lay Me Down ~*Marge Tindal*~ Lay me down in the meadow of dawn where our love was born Play fervent flickered kisses off the shoulders of gentle skin awaiting warm~ Bloom me of love, in renew with well-intended caress of you~ Scatter the seed-needs of our love across the meadowed whispers to germinate in the early Spring when once more you will lay me down in the meadow down in the meadow of you ... of you~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
hmmm, dear Marge! I am momentarily unable to speak ... dare I say, this is my favorite of your many beautiful works! Sigh! Love and Joy. Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Scatter the seed-needs of our love across the meadowed whispers to germinate in the early Spring when once more you will lay me down in the meadow down in the meadow of you ... of you~ ultimately, your words linger in a rhyme of whispers, drowning in poetic wonder... |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
Marge this really leaves me quite speechless thank you for sharing with me Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Images so beautiful and lovingly expressed Hope |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Marge .... just beautiful. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis.....Your touch of warm meadow is a delight to read this morning.  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
OMG!!  Dear Marge girl, this is incredibly exquisite, loved the warm, heartfelt emotion in it...you've expressed yourself so beautifully with this, well done. ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very beautiful Marge!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
so romantic.. *sigh*... hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Margie Gal....did you spike your punch today? Nicely done...Hope your year continues to be prosperous for you. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
So romantic, Marge. I can picture the quietitude of the meadown, yet dancing spirits all combined together. A very pleasant and enjoyable read! miscellanea |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Superbly written... A romantic poem and a delicious read... Neeraja |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Margie, I'm lost for words. This is a surprisingly passionate yet gentle write. it made me think of jonquils and spring days. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
My soul Marge if you're not a poet with words like these then there are no poets! "Scatter the seed-needs of our love across the meadowed whispers to germinate in the early Spring when once more you will lay me down in the meadow down in the meadow of you ... of you~" Beautiful write! Eric |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ VERY humbly, I thank you all~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Words as beautiful as the dear Marge herself... im always in awe and never let down... thank you chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Chris~ Thank you, sweets~ You sure know how to make a gal feel good~ I so appreciate seeing you here again~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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