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Jeep Monkey
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0 posted 2006-01-03 04:58 PM


In South Carolina, these January showers are most unusual, and welcomed, as we kick off the new year with very temperate weather.
~~~

January Showers

Precise drops
fall to their timely demise
tap tapping
sound lets me see with closed eyes

Rhythmic pelts
laugh at the calendar's face
drip dripping
unexpected time and place

Constant song
plays on the canvas jeep top
rap rapping
Thunderstorm's piece doesn't stop

jm

[This message has been edited by Jeep Monkey (01-03-2006 06:57 PM).]

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1 posted 2006-01-03 07:10 PM


Well, we have been receiving showers here in Ontario Canada too! Very unusual this time of year. Great write. Enjoyed. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-01-03 07:34 PM


Very very nice!  Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

shades of paul
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3 posted 2006-01-04 08:09 AM


A cool rain poem....paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

LeeJ
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4 posted 2006-01-04 08:19 AM


my girlfriend lives in Beauford and loves it there...beautiful writing
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2006-01-04 09:22 AM


You choice of wording was perfection!  I heard the read.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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6 posted 2006-01-05 06:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
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7 posted 2006-01-06 11:44 PM


Jeep Monkey,

  This is wonderful!  I agree, "written to perfection!"  May I keep?

   miscellanea

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8 posted 2006-01-07 06:15 PM


Enjoyed very much

and then He created the horse...

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