Open Poetry #36 |
January Showers |
Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
In South Carolina, these January showers are most unusual, and welcomed, as we kick off the new year with very temperate weather. January Showers Precise drops fall to their timely demise tap tapping sound lets me see with closed eyes Rhythmic pelts laugh at the calendar's face drip dripping unexpected time and place Constant song plays on the canvas jeep top rap rapping Thunderstorm's piece doesn't stop jm [This message has been edited by Jeep Monkey (01-03-2006 06:57 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well, we have been receiving showers here in Ontario Canada too! Very unusual this time of year. Great write. Enjoyed. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice! Much enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
A cool rain poem....paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
my girlfriend lives in Beauford and loves it there...beautiful writing |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You choice of wording was perfection! I heard the read. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Jeep Monkey, This is wonderful! I agree, "written to perfection!" May I keep? miscellanea |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Enjoyed very much and then He created the horse... |
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