Open Poetry #36 |
Passion |
ladynovice Junior Member
since 2006-01-05
Posts 11NY, USA |
I looked at you And I knew The pulsating sensation Proved I wanted you I longed to touch So very much And hold you close Was what I needed most The things I tried To be by your side A caress on your thigh A hug goodbye And a brush of my hand Was what I planned All my sensations Proved my greatest expectations A desire I could no longer contain I knew I would never be able to abstain I wanted you, I needed you This I had to gain Ever so soft and gentle As if it was incidental I reached to you for that long awaited kiss What I got I will forever miss Ecstasy and longing exploded That was what was bestowed Your kiss was like electricity Filled with so much felicity Hungrily I sought your lips I was in my own solar eclipse My tongue tried to dampen the fire But I had reached ultimate desire The quivering in my stomach and my groin I knew that you and I had to join Did you feel the same thing I did, Was your heart pounding like mine Was it a feeling you can not define? The constant tingling kept the fire going My burning desire was what was growing It had erupted in me And I was to decree I never knew it would happen You were my much long awaited passion |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Fire! Enjoyed your passionate rendering of a magical encounter! Love, Margherita |
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ladynovice Junior Member
since 2006-01-05
Posts 11NY, USA |
Thank you Margarita |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
someone could only be so lucky to have you feel that stongly about them...fantastic read..thanks for sharing. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
this write is hotttt !!!!! what a blaze of passion dang !!!! ~wolfie |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words were filled with passion and desire. Great write. Take care...........Sue I am in motion |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful expressed passionate desire Hope |
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