Open Poetry #36 |
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Flirting |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
~~Flirting~~ I raced my heart on walking speed, Body needing an overhaul. Eyes that followed were returned by these of hazel, answering call. Tiredness from working day and in between the one of sore. But forcing new the promise made to self, a tightening, maybe more. Jokingly, for I am fun, sometimes I'm told, but disagree. Laughter's medicine forgets the ache of loneliness in me. For I am one who dreads the dark, the Winter's edge of cold and such. Longing always for the warmth, the full of moon, a loving touch. Even if a stranger's words can smile upon this body's need. Pretending more than really is he placed inside this head a seed. Today, I work to rest the next, tomorrow's resolute will come reminding me that I exist, allowing feel, instead of numb. Learning more from this one day, replacing mask I wear to hide the sadness felt when all alone when silence choiced was me denied. To add the newness to my life perhaps, maybe will change the course with teasing words of ageless thoughts this may become my lifeline source. Releasing all the worried past, allowing that which walled before, the blocking out attention's gift, I now accept for want of more. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Releasing all the worried past, allowing that which walled before, the blocking out attention's gift, I now accept for want of more You go girl !! A little flirting can make a grey day much brighter. With that smile of yours...you shouldn't feel lonely long! hugs, Chris |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Today, I work to rest the next, tomorrow's resolute will come reminding me that I exist, allowing feel, instead of numb. Learning more from this one day, replacing mask I wear to hide the sadness felt when all alone when silence choiced was me denied. ~*~ Flirt away! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice , very but hike up yur skirt a little too ![]() plus some stilletos and black lace thighhighs never hurt either |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A new gym opened not too far away from me and I promised myself I would join and the owner and I were doing the "age" guessing thing...which always does me justice...because I appear younger than I am. Anyway, this being a new thing for me, setting the machines properly sometimes made for a few laughs...which we both enjoyed. Thanks for the read. ![]() M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Michele..there are too many younger women/girls there..I don't need to be compared to them. Besides I don't believe that is the proper exercise outfit. ![]() I am sure when the warmer weather hits I will dress less...I just wear my smile alot! and ask for help alot for now~~~ ![]() ![]() *laughing* here M |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
the gym, sounds like the right place to meet some good looking, buns of steel types...good on you! ~hugs~ ![]() Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is the right attitude dear Maureen! It will do you good on more than one level ... go on flirting! Very enjoyable write! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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the grey Member
since 2006-01-06
Posts 119Queensland, Australia. |
G'day M. Pleasant verses and I hope all that flirting pays off. The Grey Accept that some days you're the pigeon, and some days you're the statue. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
M-lady, sounds like you're on a goodd track with this one. I would do well myself to follow your lead. I joined the gym the other day and am getting some exercise, so I guess that's a start. As always, I enjoyed your penning. I just know you are going to have a better year. ![]() |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
sometimes we accept what we can't change after all it's enshrined in the wisdom prayer. But sometimes we accept the things we can change and make ourselves miserable in the process. It's good to see that despite your words you are still changing and growing. Good job Maureen. I like the way this holds together, like looking from both sides of the mirror. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
So many great stanzas here. I've always enjoyed your writing, but it seems to me that it particularly has blossomed in the last three or four months. I really like how you are playing with words, especially opposites: "I raced my heart on walking speed," Have a good weekend, M. miscellanea |
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