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marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2006-01-04 01:10 AM

Meant to Be

Sometimes you can taste happiness
Like a sweetness on the tip of your tongue,
Not unlike a subtle understanding that comforts fear
Or a stare shared between distant stars---
A trust that slumbers underneath Venetian skies
Smiling to sips of burgundy and passion defined…

Sometimes you can listen to unhappiness,
The whispering of cautious heartbeats
Kissing the closing eyelids of the sunset
While the heart slayer weeps into solitude’s river;
But above the confusion of what is perceived,
Soars the bluest and truest of doves
Grasping tightly onto the dreams of dreamers,
(Like a sinner holding onto old ways)
Burdens that becomes heavy,
Slipping into the nights unending vulnerabilities…

Sometimes you have to look for happiness;
Facing and embracing the reflection,
Of true happiness, the first time it is felt;
Listen to the words of one that knows,
One who has been where you reside---
The search is worth the find,
The tears are worth the pain,
The hope is worth the next sunny day,
Chance is worth the many heartbreaks
Because true love is worth its keep.

Marcel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2006-01-04 02:14 AM

This is inspiring! What a wonderful heart you show here.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-01-04 09:05 AM

Marcel~

Oh my friend ... you certainly are courting a marvelous muse !!!!

'Kissing the closing eyelids of the sunset'

I can only *sigh* at this beautiful thought ...~

The ALL of this is stunning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2006-01-04 09:19 AM

"Sometimes you can taste happiness
Like a sweetness on the tip of your tongue,
Not unlike a subtle understanding that comforts fear
Or a stare shared between distant stars---
A trust that slumbers underneath Venetian skies
Smiling to sips of burgundy and passion defined…"

Loved that first stanza very much!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-01-04 09:11 PM

Outstanding write!
TD

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2006-01-05 11:45 AM

quote:
Sometimes you have to look for happiness;
Facing and embracing the reflection

Just so!

Very beautiful write!

Love,
Margherita

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

6 posted 2006-01-05 11:20 PM

what a tender, sweet poem.....loved it.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2006-01-05 11:31 PM

"The search is worth the find,
The tears are worth the pain,
The hope is worth the next sunny day,
Chance is worth the many heartbreaks
Because true love is worth its keep."

~ Yes! Yes! Yes! A marvellousy bouyant write!

May true love be yours forever more!

Linda

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

8 posted 2006-01-06 10:58 PM

marcel,

Enjoyed your tender reflection and bits of wisdom very much, especially the last stanza!

miscellanea

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