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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 Carpe' Diem |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Sharon! This is gooooood!  ....jo |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
where every single dream is only another silent implosion. this was absolutely wonderful, great great write  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Love the way you did this one, Sharon. I love the graphic and the poem. By the way, am missing your emails.  Hugs, Ethel |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed Swarming in wishing longing , hey Sharon sounds like me Hope |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Whoa!! exceptional piece, very well expressed...Enjoyed! ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this one a lot. There's a lot of angst in it and you always manage to find the right graphic for each of your poems! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well, I assume there is something written in the picture that I can't see thanks to big brother...  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully done they can take everything but our soul, a mightly powerful force this was great |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Implosions haunt my dreams.  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully expressed, Sharon ... I love it when you write like this. Dark, mysterious, full of inner thoughts and reflection. Excellent phrasing ... loved this.  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hi! I was having a "moment" on New Year's Eve actually, when someone asked me if I was married. I said, "Am I married? I have been married, and married, and married!"  Then Martie and I talked over IM and I said I had too much energy for most men to keep up with and I always picked the wrong ones, so I left them (or they me.) She gave me a lightbulb moment by saying, "Maybe it's you not them?" I of course thought, "True Enough." I decided then I would write out that disappointed feeling of always wanting the little house in the country, with a white picket fence, cat, dog, 2.5 children, and just one man who had LOTS of energy! LOL.Thanks for reading this - and Sharon, this one I wrote first, then hunted down a graphic I could feel next. then modified it to go with it. I needed the blue as in blue. In the process I found another book of graphics I had that have inspired the muse, whooo hooo! Thanks Martie for the inspire of this one. Carpe' Diem |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon....I'm so glad that you wrote this!! All that energy you have makes some fine poetry...really! If I helped in any way, then I'm very glad...at your service any time! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
One of your best, lady. I know you aren't comfortable writing "dark" but this is so very apt a descriptive write. Much love to you.  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
It gets better and better Liz |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
For me, heart wishes don't float away...they burn. Floating away would be nice, if it could happen. That would imply that they might float back again some time. All the same, the inside dimensions of this poem stir me deep. Thank you for bringing it to be. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Truly amazing, I love this side of you Sharon (in writing) *grin* But you know . . . I always think the same thing too . . . and I KNOW its me. *smile* You do have all of that stuff anyhow. But yes, I know . . . Nice tight writing. I like you darkish. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This one caught me off guard .... that's a good thing. Very much enjoyed this serious, sensitive write. hugs, Chrislane Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautifully written, Mysteria. - Owl |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
At one time all I wrote was dark, then one day I found the light, but I still enjoy writing it once in a wee while. It came about by thinking about something Martie had said to me a few hours earlier. Thank you for coming on the dark side of me for a visit. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I'm just adding my voice to the others here because I so enjoyed the read. Thanks. Helen |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you for reading - I enjoyed doing it. Carpe' Diem |
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