Open Poetry #36 |
when i knew how to fly |
EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
when i knew how to fly i felt free and i wanted them to see me i wanted them to see me soar in the sky and i wanted to see them fly with me into the setting star until we pierced through clouds of twilight blue by all i hold dear and in the name of love itself i long to go wherever i choose to not answering to anyone but the kindred spirits at my side with them i want to share the most sacred of things i want to ride every rollercoaster of every amusement park that ever was without having to wait on a line i want to see the ones i have lost again and see how beautiful they have become in all of thier sacred divinity i want a perfect dream home with every imaginable convenience and many would come to visit me and drink the finest wine under heaven's stars i want to love and be loved in this glorious life of mine i want to believe in this aimless journey i want to stand triumphant at it's end at the beginning i want to scream in sheer victory i hope for the day when i sob with joy and fall to my knees in surrender to the beautiful things i have yet forgotten |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh Joseph, this IS amazing. I want this too - it is what we strive for Why we are here, even in pain . . . and yet, understanding does not always come. I love this. I wish you peace and that it may come back to us all . . . We are the bleeding hearts and artists. This blew me away. Simple things, yet so very hard to grasp. Quite insane if you really think about. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is wonderful. Thankyou for this today. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Written with much passion, ES! I used to know how to fly too. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
We are all so alike really, and this proves it. My but your writing has grown to a wonderful new level, mature, in-depth, and so easily comprehended. Really liked this one. |
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beaniebaby Member
since 2005-11-17
Posts 55 |
this title, this entire write is so close to my heart........beautifully written...wow |
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