Open Poetry #36 |
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Rapture of the Rose (repost) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
![]() Delicate violet hidden in peaceful wooded vale sister of the daffodil and teller of this tale Bouquets of love unclaimed lay moldering in the hedge sister flowers breathing soft and browning on the edge Tossed from a fleeing bride whose groom had been untrue carelessly thrown from a car tied to a billet-doux Goodbye words dotted with a tear spoke of pain and lovers lost honesty was the method dying flowers now the cost Who knows the terrible price of the rapture of the rose who pays when a lover lies and when a lover knows |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I'm a real rose lover as you know and this is super. Glad you dug it out as I had missed it. best wishes, dale Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Poet Devine, this sad piece is beautiful in it's rendering. martyjo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
The life of a rose, it is bitter/sweet. Your poem is lovely in its sadness. Happy New Year, Poet deVine! ![]() |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you for reading...it's been a long time. ![]() |
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