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Wintry Footprints
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wintry Footprints Though the path is worn and old and dreamy vine clutter evergreen bold. I will not abandon that path, despite the weeds and mossy mold. For in that one short while I was with you, your love, conquered my soul… I am trapped by your smile your kindness and giving, your ardent expression for love, and insistent stance for living… If I could hold you, just once more, wrapping my arms around you, holding you tight, I know, I would not be here retracing, frozen footprints in the snow… |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JL... you penned a  Happy New Year...Poet. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am trapped by your smile your kindness and giving, your ardent expression for love, and insistent stance for living… wonderful writing  M |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful. Happy New Year ! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
I would not be here retracing, frozen footprints in the snow… well written !!!! a heart of gold shines with ths one ~ JW |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
tender and poignant and I'm wondering if snow prints are a bit like sand prints? for I have left behind a few of those and also followed a few, and they always disappear...but maybe, just maybe they have re-appeared somewhere in the snow, where I was not looking? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write.. Happy New Year~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
If I could hold you, just once more, wrapping my arms around you, holding you tight, I know, I would not be here retracing, frozen footprints in the snow… This poetic tempo - impeccable. I really enjoyed reading these last few lines. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
JL, sending a hug, though I know it's not the one you want. The way I see it, every hug helps on that wintry walk.  Happy New Year |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is beautiful, JL I know the same sentiments. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A favorite in the volumes you have shared. TD |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"For in that one short while I was with you, your love, conquered my soul… If I could hold you, just once more," Oh yes. This says so much. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful is all I can say. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
These words speak to the heart. lovely. martyjo |
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