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| Open Poetry #36 |
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this is for the guy who reads |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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This is for the guy who reads me, not so religiously but tells me I am genius "because" he says, "because" he sees my tears before they do begin clouds within a pupil dim and distances are measurements rulers are the gods of sky and goddesses, recipients, as I propose hypothesis: "There, but for the grace, go I..." Mathematics Sciences cunning linguists and lies are history on the page. Formulatic chaos is a rubick's cube of all sides same-- disregard the coloring twist the squares maintain a fist remember that the first one is later to be last...and laugh indenting all the paragraphs when you must explain the path of a right-turn-left-turn twist (and don't forget the upside-down) This is for the guy who reads nothing up my sleeve y'see? I'm a genius, genuine-- wanna buy some property? (I could sell you New Orleans) for a pittance if we had pittances as an exchange-- and geniuses are all deranged but I'm guessing you knew that- A guess? I cackle--"genius!" Never ask a question that you don't know the answer to... (and yes, I knew that too.) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
he sees my tears before they do begin clouds within a pupil dim and distances are measurements rulers are the gods of sky and goddesses, recipients, as I propose hypothesis: "There, but for the grace, go I..." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lawdy how I love your rhyme speak!!! if we had pittances as an exchange-- and geniuses are all deranged but I'm guessing you knew that- A guess? I cackle--"genius!" Never ask a question that you don't know the answer to... (and yes, I knew that too.) how bout poetic genius   Thru the water...thru the rain |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, ok, since this was for a guy, I had to go don my tom-boy hat... just so I could read genius.    |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Only two men come to mind, three actually . . . Bob Dylan (he knows where ya are, where ya been and maybe not where you are going) A viking (a mad one, at that, whose ship is always docked at your port, m'Lady) A yeti (who shares your heart and mind and part of your spirit) The reason Dylan came to mind is because whenever I listen to Dylan, man, he makes me see myself and I don't always like that but its needed. He reaches right in and grabs ya, shakes ya awake and says Listen! I just have ta say this one thing . . . |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Formulatic chaos is a rubick's cube of all sides same-- disregard the coloring twist the squares maintain a fist remember that the first one is later to be last...and laugh indenting all the paragraphs when you must explain the path of a right-turn-left-turn twist (and don't forget the upside-down)" -------------------------------------------- "Come writers and critics Who prophesize with your pen And keep your eyes wide The chance won't come again And don't speak too soon For the wheel's still in spin And there's no tellin' who That it's namin'. For the loser now Will be later to win For the times they are a-changin'." I see the connection, Little wing.... A poem like this can only come out of adversity, from one who has met its challenge...has bobbed to the surface, and came out swinging her pen. One who knew if she didn't start "swimmin' ", that she would "sink like a stone..." As Dylan pointed out, earlier in his poem/song. This reply is from a guy...(probably not as well as the one of which you speak...) that always reads you... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sheesh I thougth for sure it was God himself! Being off the wall in a sort of perplex sort of way, I started singing, "Amazing Grace" but yes I do know who Dylan is. I know, I know, I'm cute right? You do amaze me though - that coffee of yours and a pen - whew - what a combination! You sort of have to "splain" this one to me, but I liked it! Carpe' Diem |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
another magical write, sistah K you'd prolly be amazed (or maybe not) how many read your every postit note ~listening to your heartbeat~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Poetic genius is right! OMG! give us a  Love this m'lady. m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity...Very disguising poem. Sometimes we become the poem we write and somtime the poem becomes us without even knowing it. There is a lot of genius in your poetry mixed with a little magic sometime, which keeps the reader intrigued and trying to figure you out, which is what I like most about your poetry...Enjoyed very much...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Many ways to interpret this... and I love them all... and YOU... and yes... you ARE a genius... *smile* "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'd be happy to read you - if i knew what language you were written in Praise be to the code-breakers  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh... I hope I am not so difficult to understand. That thought kind of amplifies my loneliness. sheesh I thought I was being playful--wince--no??? the rubick's cube? sigh...it's just a formula yanno. Anyone can learn it. The trick is to just follow the formula--wince again--it's mathy stuff I can't explain. Thank you all for reading me-- I know I am perplexity and no it's not deliberate it's simply my equivilent of y times o and integers are lives within parenthesis and those they must be solved at first before there's sum lucidity... ? I thank you all. Damn. I did it, yet again. I should take to clouds. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 homeschooling math?grins here, remembering |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen I'm pretty sure you do talk to clouds!! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Yes...well...good "cunning linguists" are hard to find. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 Tell me about it.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Here I am thinking you're so cool but I can't read you right but I do know there's always something up yore (sp. on purpose of course) sleeve.......It's usually a stroke of genius of some sort..... Carry on Celeste! Eric |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 "and what's in the parenthesis' is what must be solved first.." is exactly what I was thinking as I read it! (in the reply). Sometimes, I do get it!!!  Love you lady. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I'd by NO now..before the crowds come with buckets of gold and new vegas promises.. as for the poem it is what I expect from you in your unexpectional style.. and I enjoy dit (grin)cunning huh? |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well did he read this you genius you? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks again for laughing with me. Ya'll are my poetry dream team. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
And your words sing a timeless song which reach into the very marrow of the human skull. Left or right brained, this is a marvelous write. Enjoyed. JL |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
One of my favorites! It is so truly you, at least the you I know (all of them are, but this one is so personal, like you are face to face with God, or perhaps, the counterpart of you). And, of course, your "Erma" is shinning right through. ....jo |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Enjoyed the read. |
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