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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-12-29 11:46 PM



I have loved you once
feeling the heartbeats
against each others soul

Making me feel like
no one in this world
could every take us apart

When I gazed in your eyes
I could fly my amazing dreams
the thought of you, gleams

When I was away from you
my heading was spinning
felt like a piece was missing

Now I miss you since you are gone
being without you this day
is dreadful in so many ways, now here I pray

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
Sharksbean
Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368
jax
1 posted 2005-12-30 07:30 PM


awww thats such a sweet write i think any guy would be blessed to have you (hugs) love you and have a very HAPPY NEW YEAR MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2005-12-30 08:44 PM


Very, very nice.  Heartfelt words.

JL

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