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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-12-28 09:58 PM

,

There is no more pretense
nor demurity of pink;
all cloaks and shawls
elude for now,
all but a sprinkling
of white, random
as old fallen leaves,
that tickle
her twisted frame
now and then,
on the wind's discretion,

and for the season,
she stands, as is,
and dares you
to look away.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-29-2005 07:46 AM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2005-12-29 12:58 PM

stripped down to their bare essence theyre still beautiful, sometimes moreso, whether it be trees/humans

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2005-12-29 09:07 AM

very good
and it is a poem

John

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

3 posted 2005-12-29 09:42 AM

as old fallen leaves,
that tickle
her twisted frame
now and then,
on the wind's discretion

Great words, made a great poem good work

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2005-12-29 11:11 AM

She is beautiful in her nakedness.

Always is.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-12-29 11:29 AM

"and for the season,
she stands, as is,
and dares you
to look away."

Smiling here...at you and this most beautiful piece of work.
Well done Michele!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738