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Two Sloped Hills, A mile Away
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Two Sloped Hills, A mile Away |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
The two sloped hills, a mile away, Are her bare shoulders- Cleared fields, each side-dropping Right and left...prove nature is sensual, Though sometimes unaware of exposition- (of course) I say this metaphorically. Shadows falling, make a dress, Hiding curves that hint at broad expansion; Two hillocks rise, like faux pax breasts, And I am entranced...mentally-physically. How lovely the trees make a lawn On the mound above the dark crevasse. Of interest to me is this, She has no eyes to see me leering- Does not turn away-look sidelong- Faking unaware, like human women (Acting shyly) often peer; But both are unable To hide the truth from me, As a large portion of my delight Comes from observing, coy tendencies. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I had never thought of nature in this way exactly, but you're right, Ford. This is just beautiful.  .....jo |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ford To personify like you do, what a lovely walk you could persue. Thanks for the view. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
mmmm-hmmmmm. But I knew this. I eat oysters...  *battin' lashes* achoo tis' lovely, but I feel a little odd, like someone just described my mother through a lover's eyes...  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is a beautiful voyeur's touch... when a man plays nature's shadings in such a way, as to humanize the earth... Well done, Sir... but then, you never fail us, ever. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ford, as always, you honor her with this loving, sensual write. And though I don't eat oysters, am understanding K's comment, and grinning. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I wanna live where you do . . . what kind of nature do you see, Ford? Mannn . . . *grin* This was beautiful. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Soft rolling hills of virgin snow, Reveal a form in winter glow. The nature man's a poet fair, ~His seeing eyes are quite aware! Nice Ice I do so enjoy your poetry!  Linda |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
My what lovely replies...  I see through the eyes of one that loves the sensual parts of nature, and it is sensual, although our senses have been dulled because we have forgotten the proper way to be intimate with it. I make sensual reference to it (the earth) because it is beautiful... I love women and the earth more than men for several reasons...one of which is the history of how both have been mistreated and degraded in the past..someone must start to make amends...My feelings are that a man cannot fully love a woman without loving the earth first...and so I make comaprisons in some of my poetry... Another reason is that I am a closet dirty old man....lol This aught to make Serenity chuckle if she comes back... Thanks for reading and the replies.. ______________ice ><> |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'm not serenity...but it made ME chuckle! |
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pictureme2 Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 194 |
Ford, To look and still be able to see the completeness of sensuality Lovely write. I enjoyed it threw your loving eyes! Thanks for sharing this piece! pictureme2 |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Earth is female in all ways. and you said this in a most beautiful, sensual way. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This female says, WOW!!! You write with passion of your feelings for nature and women. Beautiful indeed m'friend. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
uh huh I can spot 'em everytime...  |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Another beautiful read |
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