You Are Lonely In My Dreams

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Open Poetry #36

You Are Lonely In My Dreams

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2005-12-29 12:53 PM

I feel your yearning

lightning flash of memories

the past in still life

©2005 by icebox

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2005-12-29 12:59 PM

excellent

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-12-29 01:03 AM

dreams come in the dark
in color red I am dressed
mornings I forget

You do this so much better then I can...always an impact.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2005-12-29 02:25 AM

Yes, of course it's excellent. It's what we've come to expect and you never let us down.
Happy New Year!
Helen

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-12-29 07:11 AM

It is there always

in the heaviness of heart

a life in reruns

enjoyed your thoughts this morning
M

pictureme2
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 194

5 posted 2005-12-29 10:01 AM

Bravo!
picturme2

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2005-12-29 10:15 AM

this is wonderful
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2005-12-29 10:19 AM

eek...I feel naked!

Your words have a way of getting inside me.

but that is because you are a master.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2005-12-29 01:03 PM

I think we are all lonely.

The saddest part is that I think we all choose to be...

a kiss, then?

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2005-12-29 03:23 PM

Yesssss!

perfectamento!

M

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

10 posted 2005-12-29 03:48 PM

Erma Bombeck said “Dreams have only one owner at a time. That’s why dreamers are lonely”. Nice poem icebox. - Ed Grim

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2005-12-29 07:53 PM

Thought provoking, and I liked the contrast of the flash with the still. Yes, that's how it feels.

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