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Time, Lords….on a second’s urge…[no, it couldn’t wait]
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Time, Lords….on a second’s urge…[no, it couldn’t wait] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Time, Lords….on a second’s urge…[no, it couldn’t wait] One would trust that our tick, tick, tick would remain of itself, quick and slick, but wait they say, for just one second… should we hold our breath? or make a wish? seize someone and seal a kiss? or trust on faith of mustard seeds… or a hold upon my heart? For in one thousand years, [or…eight million, seven hundred sixty thousand hours….] or about that, and so, they say, an hour would so slowly grow in the whim and roam of earth’s rotation, simply by a second’s urge and they think it important, to all nations…to hold from whim, our need to splurge into the new year…into the new… into all like a teacup’s brew… [Help me, Alice, find the White Rabbit… someone’s late, for tea]  ~*~ One would think that on a whimsy’s must would not lead one on to such a trust as to adhere to another than the sound of wind… and yet, they make us think, for a moment, and yet again… on a second’s urge… ~*~ so in this encapsulated tried and tied, trite but true moment, I will take an instant captured, a second’s urge to sigh… and hold all that is right on a second’s splurge, before I hide my cry… even before I can wish on a second’s just held urge… Happy New Year to all of Passions, and I squeak in, just before the forthcoming surge…. ~*~ I do want to thank all of you for seeing so many through 2005... and for giving such hope to all for the new of 2006. Always... Sunshine |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Well, I'm kind of speechless here. This is one hell of a beautiful New Years wish dear friend. One that goes straight to my heart. Many, many knuffels to you Karilea and a Happy New Year to you too. You really dipped your pen in sparkling ink  TitiaLike scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Fagin Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 126Ca |
Well done, Sis. One always wonders where the last year went and what the new one will bring us. Life is full of brilliant flashes and Im happy to say one of them is you. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sunshine, Let me take a second's urge to place your poem tenderly on my shelf. In my mind, this is brilliantly written in thoughts, words, and pause. miscellanea |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie I walk with you, holding your hand with understand. |
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