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a new normal yet ( for m'lady serenity)
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a new normal yet ( for m'lady serenity) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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i would gather the black root willows that fall like night from your crown i’d cup them like daisies, and garland a nest for your soul beloved for the rivers that run from your eyes and weave like lovers and fall like kisses one by one... they cannot do without the other beneath the voice of do not leave me alone again for paths have crossed between the moon and dying nights and in the mist of tigers and river-beds we'll find a new normal yet how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more ~Neruda~ [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (12-27-2005 04:48 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Some days I feel like, I must have been a bad bad girl in a previous life, and then there are gifts like these, from you, "my beloved" and damn if I didn't do something right. *tears* and relief that somebody understands me and wow she is a goddess too!  I love you Maria.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is beautiful, Maree... and a lovingly fitting gift for our serene one...  to you both..."When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree...the way you mix imagery and feeling together is always so amazingly beautiful! As is this poem! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Maree, I have felt your heart, but I do believe that our Serenity can actually hold it in her hand. Today was a good day for a gifting. Your picture is absolutely angelic. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maree? This is angelic . . . What a beautiful gift. Made me smile. Ladies |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wheee but this one soars! how beautiful! talk about lovin your sistah! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh my... this is simply perfect for our Karen. Wonderful Maree!! hugs, Chris |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Beautiful verse, Maree. I am without words. Billy 8) "Only the dead, have seen the end of war." |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
and in the mist of tigers and river-beds we'll find a new normal yet ~creative writing maree , i like how the title is also the last line of this gem your good real good !!! : ) ~Jamestown |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You simply FLOORED me with this one! It's utterly brilliant and beautiful. Into my library, quick! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely done! And dedicated to the right person for sure....However, somehow I hope she never finds "a new normal" That might be a huge poetic crash... Eric |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Maree, you are a beautiful soul.  and Karen? I swear I wrote the email before I read this...lol "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
ye goddess bella |
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