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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2005-12-28 05:57 PM



The weight begins to lift away from you
as angels in the clouds rest their wings quietly
my electric love returns from another land
something sacred is what they wish for
not all the riches and gold, they want
soul and heart songs
in these times of mass media
the specialty of real magic grows rare
gone away to Atlantis
under the Himalaya's
silent underground networks of secret orders
and hidden royalty of old castles and history past
the unseen world , yin and yang
it is my time to shine light in dark places
to return and to pave a path back home
our passion is very much alive again
forever does exist
knowledge is learned from books
opened and closed
they show pieces of big puzzles
that till now , slept unsolved
earth , sun and moon , water and fire
release the wind and awaken the planets
with their guidance
a new age comes to the world
these topics touched by reason
the mystic singers and shamans are brought
together for goodness and for remedy
to cure the wounds of the past
those polar shifts made us shine  
i found healing in the moon lit garden of stars
                      
JDW III  12-27-2005

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2005-12-28 06:20 PM


An excellent work JW...I enjoyed this very much.
TD

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2 posted 2005-12-28 06:48 PM


aw

"i found healing in the moon lit garden of stars"

It is clear in the meaning of the last part of your poem, that you really did.  Very uplifting!!  Thank you.
                      

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3 posted 2005-12-28 07:05 PM


"knowledge is learned from books
opened and closed"

How very true, JW.
Sometimes we overlook that which is already there.

I enjoyed this poem very much.
It has a mystic quality very much like Tolkein.

Thanks, man.

CB 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

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4 posted 2005-12-28 08:22 PM


TD, i am glad you liked : ) thanks for
the kind words
Marti, there is something about the moon that has always made me smile and that is true healing , that an lol's : ) thanks for reading
Coyote,  Tolkien is the man lol i could only dream of being in his bracket of writing honors , and about the open and closed books yes i forget the things i have read in the past and even a book that's closed can offer insights ...
~Peace to you this new year !!!
~JW

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5 posted 2005-12-28 09:29 PM


a nice place to come upon
stars moon and magic

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6 posted 2005-12-29 02:47 PM


thanks igoddess
stars the moon and magic are my faves
~peace and hugs ~JW

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