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aujussy wolf

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since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

0 posted 2005-12-26 04:57 PM

spaced out from the rest
a little bit different
the way i talk could cause a thought
to be as it is meant to be
waves far from my body
i see them
in the oceans
swimming free

JDW III

Jeep Monkey
Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 96
Chaos

1 posted 2005-12-26 06:06 PM

This is chewy. I've read it over and over again in one sitting. I shall return to it again. Short. Easy to read. Definition full, though. I'm inspired by words that cause so much thought.

JM

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-12-26 07:03 PM

and I see...

dolphins...

in sunlight beam...

thank you, Sir!

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

3 posted 2005-12-26 07:36 PM

Jeepers .... your reply gave me much joy , i think i will write some more tonight ... the urge to write comes and goes just like the wind ...i try and grasp the thoughts that swirl about me

peace

Sunny one

so kind thanks for reading and for helping me out with my edit woes lol
peace to you also
~and much love to all
wolfy~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2005-12-26 07:39 PM

all ya need is the right hook, line and sinker....winkies

to tow em in

Nice work here Wolfie

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2005-12-26 08:18 PM

I see words forming thoughts and lingering there - you afraid to say them, you are grabbing them all up for when the time is just right . . .

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

6 posted 2005-12-26 08:30 PM

darky angel... lol i loved that reply
LOTS, it fit in place purrfect ...
the hook, line and sinker lol it towed u in ...

there has to be a santa claus!!!!
xoxo peace ~

littlewings ... how did you know lol
thats just what i do ... your so clever
littles you know me toooo well hahaa
jus kiddin babe

peace oxox

time to go howl at the moon
i feel loved , pip rocks ~!!!!
~James

[This message has been edited by aujussy wolf (12-27-2005 12:31 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2005-12-27 09:30 AM

Hey James
*smile*

it was this part and yes, I do know you

i see them
in the oceans
swimming free

made me think of words floating about . . .

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

8 posted 2005-12-27 10:19 AM

very cool
yeah its that time
time to pick the words from the air like
apples in an orchard , on a warm sun-lit morning ... the time to look at life with
the eyes of a child (an old moody blues song ) ... i love winter the cold and snow make me long for the summer nights ...
anyhow peace to you littlewing from across the great lake..

~James

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2005-12-28 03:37 PM

Great write.

Eric

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

10 posted 2005-12-28 04:06 PM

thanks eric
howls ~wolfman

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

11 posted 2005-12-29 12:47 PM

The whole thing is wonderful

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2005-12-29 12:55 PM

a perfectly awesome short write.
much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

bgj
Member

since 2005-11-09

Posts 128
Ga. USA

13 posted 2005-12-29 12:57 PM

Great write man, love the title also.
Peace,
bgj

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

14 posted 2005-12-29 02:43 PM

Dominique-Simone
thanks for checking it out

Nightshade
so happy you enjoyed this one
((hugs)) too

bgj
thanks the title was right where i was at that day , in my own daydream cafe

peace to all , thanks for the looks

~JW

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