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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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behind the windows of wine we weave our gold into water there where the pale mountains with freckled valleys jut to the sun kiss mouths and I imagine my mind as a bowl of dust in spin as your fingers trace the digits dialing numbers at random and answering in some other language just so I can hear your mouth when it is dry speaking begging for the water of a kiss and some insatiable salty crackers that keep it wanting more and you wonder of worthy when it is just a word and you are a dream with wings that you folded on purpose to fit the gloving of my hands when my awestruck hit the curb _____________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and you wonder of worthy when it is just a word ~*~ This one is wearable... good morning, Sir! |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This is a wonderful poem just so I can hear your mouth when it is dry speaking begging for the water of a kiss and some insatiable salty crackers that keep it wanting more |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love all of your poetry, and you know I love a slam-dunk ending (<--see how I'm feeding him ammo, folks?) but this one, the construction of it did it so aptly-- "when my awestruck hit the curb" I read this just after reading Inkedgoddess' post "as is" and the two together played out in my mind, meshing beautifully. You two ever, um, write together?   |
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Flawless New Member
since 2005-12-09
Posts 4 |
"and you wonder of worthy when it is just a word and you are a dream with wings that you folded on purpose to fit the gloving of my hands" I wonder of your words. The tender way you ink the soul and autograph a cloudless sky with sensuality. If only to be bathed in the rain of your pen, with the knowledge of your parting at a broken sentence end. I would eagerly beg to be the final syllable upon your tongue -waiting to be baptized in the flow of such dark, cleansing conversation. Your words inspire me to remove the mask. I am sure you understand. Flawless |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine..thanks to you lady mod with a smile..you do bless me __________________ Dom Si' Thanks for the review, it is a pleasure to have your eyes visit my pen __________________ ms serene...you make me grin as usual...am so pleased that you enjoyed my curb appeal.. and yes I do enjoy the mystery of the inked one with her pen...seems she sees the same streets sometimes, from another side. Thanks lady _______________ Ms Flawless, you writhe me with pleasure a serpent round the wrist perhaps, with your gentle bathe of suggestion. Dare I day dream of the lady without the mask and if I wore one would she recognize the glass of me behind, thank you for the whispers...you awaken me |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, i like his streets too.. but it's been a while since he visited me.. if you see him, serene one, tell him i could use a good cyberjump again  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky.. got the 120 volts all hooked up and the puddle of water too come play in my steel den? thank you for the eyes here ms |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
The "Sun" is right... i could wear this *smile* you master you. one for the library m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms D, humble thanks to the angel of you, with conciliable bow... |
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