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Double Doors |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
Double Doors doors always doors still on the sidewalk I realize there are two doors here even if I could open the first there would be another this place you live has security I should be glad but I am not glad of the workshirt guard riding his electric cart and badge around the corner I am not glad because I have forgotten my key he glances back at me thinking about the sandwich in his car he can't open the doors not these distance is a door so is silence pass one meet another many pairs of doors apathy and anger overgrowth, stagnation ennui and ennui these doors are only planes of wood with shackles but it is always doors always doors and somehow you on another side of them now they are doubled and I have no key no way in unless Kaz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kazm....you're right...there are all kinds of doors and the ones made of wood are the easiest to open. I enjoyed this poem! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, I love this! and a long time ago, I wrote one doors! doors! oh how I hate them! always slamming someone in the face oh, those wretched wretched doors put in place by some of the (in)human race |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
distance is a door so is silence pass one meet another many pairs of doors apathy and anger overgrowth, stagnation ennui and ennui You double the enjoyment given here... with much to reflect upon... physical doors aren't the only ones we face without keys to bid them open. I particularly like the "unless" that ends this... perhaps beginning more. *S* Excellent write... I've missed your work! |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
Cool poem, great ending. Great job, bgj |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
tight write kaz ... this is going in my faves , nice to read this ... made me realize some things i needed to , thanks for letting pip hear your words ~jw |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Kafka? John |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Excellent! Provokes thought.. thank you, martyjo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
a very cool write! Doors, for sure... miscellanea |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Enjoy this for thought it provoked. |
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