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Open Poetry #36

Pluto (Solar Seasons)

ManOfWolves28
Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 83

0 posted 2005-12-27 05:34 PM

Frozen in the ice there is no escape.
Your screams are filled with panic and fear.
Though no one can hear.
Blinded by the blowing ice
your eyes begin to bleed.
Hypothermic skin becomes exposed as the
winds rip off your clothes, ice
cutting your skin like exploding glass.

Soon your heart begins to quicken till
death shakes your hand.
Now you lay dieying as wolves tear your
flesh, the Ice God has reclaimed his
victory on the one who failed to believe
with truth and honesty.

-Note this is not intended to be mordid. It's only a translation of a dream I had years back-

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

1 posted 2005-12-27 05:42 PM

that is a hell of a dream.

nice.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

2 posted 2005-12-27 06:31 PM

Dittos on the "hell of a dream".

The images here are not morbid at all, rather stark and reflective of life's realities.

I enjoyed reading.

CB 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

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