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shades of paul
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In Reality

0 posted 2005-12-18 12:11 PM


The sweet guitar chords danced thru her ears,
submerged in trance harmonious magic sound,
drawn to me like an enchanted bird to my wooden wing,
silence of strings entered the dark ruby lip kiss,
fermented fruit picked from the vine left taste buds sweet and begging for more,
the neverending embrace till the hint of morning light touched the horizon,
..paul



shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

[This message has been edited by shades of paul (12-19-2005 11:03 AM).]

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Gaia
1 posted 2005-12-18 04:31 PM


Nice music! I enjoy the way this plays the heart strings.
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2005-12-27 12:38 PM


A mouth watering delight.
Sorry I had missed this...was away in a winter mood.  My apologies.  You have a very diverse talent.
Write on!
TD

sometimesitslonely
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since 2005-12-27
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3 posted 2005-12-27 03:33 PM


This was beautiful. I like the style you used in poetry. I'm very glad I read this.
shades of paul
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4 posted 2005-12-27 06:49 PM


thank you for all the nice comments....paul

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