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Washed and after that
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Washed and after that |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I was washed at the night of nations I shed and shred my coat And became human I on that night assumed my beliefs That words meant more to Something I drank at your nation And I have drunk at many All that we become and became What do you ask of me and my reliefs That words are not controlled Abused I dream of woman who fly who control I dream of dreams I dream When rape victims where reduced to the Scroll Tag I fought for them to have they're as 'Sir Dave of Tag' My life has to changed and take the words And with regret I take my words I take my words Dave |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"My life has to changed and take the words" I'm uncertain about the meaning there--as I am not sure if it is written as intended or if the past tense of "changed" was a slip of the fingers, or was the word "to" an accidental addition? It rather confused me, I'm afraid. but this-- "And with regret I take my words I take my words" I understood on a personal level, as I too, have often read my own words, and eaten them like a medicine I know will make me feel worse before I feel better... I'm not sure if that is your intent, but oh I do tend to apply all I read to my life. Enjoyed the think, tho. I can appreciate the undertone of determination.  |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
Politically driven What's meant is not meant Phonetically rid them Lots spent but not spent I have waited to read a write of yours since I've noticed your most gracious and guiding replies. I was not let down. Your written creativity flies. JM |
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